C1 Advanced · Writing Paper · Test 2

Writing Part 1
The Essay

The compulsory essay, decoded: see exactly what the examiner rewards, study an annotated model, then draft your own and send it for personal feedback.

Compulsory task 220–260 words About 45 minutes Personal feedback
How this page works. Read the task and strategy, study the annotated model, then write your own essay in the draft box. The word counter keeps you in range. When you are happy, use the submission tool at the bottom to send it to me for personal examiner feedback against the four official subscales.
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Part 1 · Essay

Your exam task

Strategy, tips & common traps

What it tests: your ability to build and support an argument in formal, neutral English.

  • Discuss exactly two of the three points — never all three, and never just one.
  • Give a clear opinion. The task asks which is more important, so you must take a position and justify it.
  • Plan four paragraphs: introduction, point one, point two, conclusion.
  • Use the three short opinions as idea-starters — reword them, never copy them.
  • Keep a formal register: avoid contractions and very informal vocabulary.
  • Aim for 220–260 words and leave two minutes to check your work.
Exam task

Your class has watched a panel discussion on how schools can best prepare young people for the future job market. You have made the notes below.

Points discussed:

  • work experience
  • digital skills
  • mental resilience

Some opinions expressed:

  • “Employers say they can teach skills, but not attitude.”
  • “A student who has never used AI tools will be at a real disadvantage.”
  • “You cannot learn how a workplace really works from a textbook.”

Write an essay discussing two of the points in your notes. You should explain which area is more important for preparing young people for the future job market, providing reasons to support your opinion.

Write 220–260 words.

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Learn from a strong answer

Annotated model

Model essay discusses digital skills & mental resilience · 244 words

In an era of rapid technological change, the question of how best to prepare young people for the workplace of tomorrow has never felt more pressing. While work experience, digital skills, and mental resilience all play a part, this essay will argue that digital competence and psychological resilience deserve particular attention.

The pace at which workplace technology now evolves is, frankly, striking. Students who leave school unfamiliar with digital and AI-based tools are likely to find themselves at an immediate disadvantage, regardless of how capable they are in other respects. Addressing this need not mean elaborate coding courses: simply embedding common workplace software into everyday lessons would go a long way. For this reason, digital skills strike me as an area where relatively small changes could yield substantial benefits.

Mental resilience presents a subtler challenge. Employers increasingly report that technical ability can be taught on the job, but the capacity to cope with setbacks, ambiguity, and constant change cannot be acquired overnight. Building this quality requires schools to tolerate a degree of struggle and failure, rather than shielding students from it at every turn. Encouraging young people to face manageable difficulty now would therefore have a lasting, if less measurable, impact.

On balance, although both areas matter, I believe that resilience is ultimately the more important priority. Technology will keep shifting in ways no curriculum can fully predict, whereas the ability to adapt calmly to that shifting ground will remain valuable for a lifetime.

Content

Discusses two of the three points (digital skills, mental resilience) and gives a clear, reasoned opinion on which matters more — exactly what the task requires.

Communicative Achievement

Holds a consistently formal essay register (“this essay will argue”, “On balance”) and keeps the target reader engaged throughout.

Organisation

Four clear paragraphs — introduction, one per point, conclusion — linked by cohesive devices (For this reason, but, whereas).

Language

A range of structures and precise vocabulary (embedding, ambiguity, shielding) used accurately and with control.
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Before you submit

Self-check: the four subscales

Cambridge marks every Writing answer on four subscales, each out of 5. Tick each box honestly before you send your essay — if you cannot tick one, that is where to revise.

Content

Communicative Achievement

Organisation

Language

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Useful language

Essay language bank

Introducing the topic

In an era of…It is often argued that…This essay will consider…The question of whether…

Presenting and developing an argument

A compelling case can be made for…One of the main advantages is…This is largely because…A further consideration is…

Weighing up / conceding

While X has clear merits,…Admittedly,…It could be argued that…, yet…despite the fact that…

Concluding with an opinion

On balance,…Taking everything into account,…For these reasons, I believe…Ultimately,…
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English Refresher · C1 Advanced Writing · Part 1: The Essay (Test 2)