The compulsory essay, decoded: see exactly what the examiner rewards, study an annotated model, then draft your own and send it for personal feedback.
What it tests: your ability to build and support an argument in formal, neutral English.
Your class has watched a panel discussion on how schools can best prepare young people for the future job market. You have made the notes below.
Write an essay discussing two of the points in your notes. You should explain which area is more important for preparing young people for the future job market, providing reasons to support your opinion.
Write 220–260 words.
In an era of rapid technological change, the question of how best to prepare young people for the workplace of tomorrow has never felt more pressing. While work experience, digital skills, and mental resilience all play a part, this essay will argue that digital competence and psychological resilience deserve particular attention.
The pace at which workplace technology now evolves is, frankly, striking. Students who leave school unfamiliar with digital and AI-based tools are likely to find themselves at an immediate disadvantage, regardless of how capable they are in other respects. Addressing this need not mean elaborate coding courses: simply embedding common workplace software into everyday lessons would go a long way. For this reason, digital skills strike me as an area where relatively small changes could yield substantial benefits.
Mental resilience presents a subtler challenge. Employers increasingly report that technical ability can be taught on the job, but the capacity to cope with setbacks, ambiguity, and constant change cannot be acquired overnight. Building this quality requires schools to tolerate a degree of struggle and failure, rather than shielding students from it at every turn. Encouraging young people to face manageable difficulty now would therefore have a lasting, if less measurable, impact.
On balance, although both areas matter, I believe that resilience is ultimately the more important priority. Technology will keep shifting in ways no curriculum can fully predict, whereas the ability to adapt calmly to that shifting ground will remain valuable for a lifetime.
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English Refresher · C1 Advanced Writing · Part 1: The Essay (Test 2)