Title: My Favorite Hobbies

Instructions:

Write a detailed paragraph about your favorite hobbies. Use Jenny’s example to help you. Include the following details:

1. What your hobbies are.
2. How long you have been doing them.
3. Why you enjoy them.
4. How they benefit you or make you feel.
5. Any challenges you face with these hobbies.

Template:

Hello! My name is [Your Name], and I want to share my favorite hobbies with you. I have two hobbies that I am very passionate about.

First, I love painting. I have been painting for about five years now. I enjoy it because it allows me to express my emotions and creativity. Painting helps me relax after a long day and provides a great way to unwind. I love experimenting with different colors and techniques to create unique pieces of art. Sometimes, I face challenges like running out of ideas or not being satisfied with my work, but I always find joy in the process of creating.

Second, I enjoy hiking. I started hiking two years ago, and it has become a regular part of my routine. I love exploring new trails and being surrounded by nature. Hiking is a great way to stay fit and clear my mind. It’s also a wonderful opportunity to take photos of beautiful landscapes. One challenge I face is the weather, as it can sometimes be unpredictable, but I always try to be prepared.

These hobbies make my life more enjoyable and balanced. They help me stay creative, active, and connected to the world around me.

Checklist:

• Use detailed descriptions and complete sentences.
• Include all the details mentioned above.
• Use connecting words and phrases like “first,” “second,” “also,” and “however.”
• Keep your writing clear, organized, and engaging.